Alone together, I strip

Plush defense mechanisms fall to my slender ankles.

Hot & Steamy. . . . .

Eyes locked shut, ready to submerse

Succulent lips part as the saturation starts.

Innocence explodes as naughty thoughts implode,

Water dripping down a coke-bottle figure,

Sweet aroma permeating my nose.

Soft caresses, spiked with imagination.

Exposed body, decisive but slow.

Confined in privacy; secluded.

Secretive curtains shielding sins.

Feminine hands gently pull luscious waist length hair.

Smooth skin beckoning for satisfaction.

Unwilling to submit to a macabre end,

I tame the beast, banish the demon.

Time well spent awakens the silence.

What a refreshing release of emotions.

Yup…. I like taking showers. ^^


P.S. Can someone help me title this poem with something that doesn’t make the ending obvious? –___–

  1. teaser :p

    I love this: “Time well spent awakens the silence.”

    • Sergio
    • October 3rd, 2010

    “Alone together” confusing lol.

    • Ever read Nikki Giovanni? I can be alone by myself, I was lonely alone, Now I’m lonely with you, There are flies everywhere…?

    • Jasmine
    • October 3rd, 2010


    • penelopephoebe
    • October 4th, 2010

    Very suggestive and funny poem.

  2. fun verse!

    • Thanks, it was fun to write knowing I was leading people in the wrong direction. Lol.

  3. Thanks for sharing, feel free to visit a few poets near your entry…

    Happy Tuesday!

  4. Rain dance and lust

    Beautifully written..

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
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  5. alone together, i strip–love that first line.

    what about using the 3rd line, or something closely related, as a title? it has the double entendre without giving the whole thing away…

  6. Really suggestive poem, really entertaining to read and re-read! Maybe a title like ‘A slippery End’

  7. That’s hot making water sound all sexxxy and what not…how about The Cascade Effect for a title? (^_^)

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